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late last summer i had planned to meet love
and walked with murder on the way
she wore a mask so beauttiful
and bore a heart of castle grey

all along i thought i knew
i loved her so deeply and so true
walking in the light of of my own red moon
knowing well my own end and knowing it to come to soon
and yet i loved her with a fools boone  

how very smooth her features where yet grim
as two faces it seemed she wore
and many bloodhounds followed them
and one by one and two by two
from behind my back and from the deepest depths of darkness she drew
and tossed them parts of my human heart to chew

and yet all along i loved her
even though i knew
that one by one and two by two
pieces of my heart the lies would consume
i gave until the day i died

five pieces for one....
and one piece for five
i gave myself to keep miss murder alive

oh how foolish thease notions where
though i loved her then
its now all a blur
if talking to myself back then now i know i must concur

for it would have been better to had loved
then lost my soul to the devil
which today i serve
then to for just one secound to give my heart again to her

if all the lessons could be tought
which i carry now in my chests empty purse
I give them all to you in just one last verse

though i gave my heart for a love
i thought few could have attained
I find it today has left me
so broken damned and drained
if nothing else you learn from my mistake
then take this with you befor you wake
the price of true love is everything
and compared to that miss murders love
is way to high a stake
i know the path dont walk the road
you'll find all thats left a whole
never bet the devil your head
in its place he steals your soul
©2008-2009 ~inrealityimcrying
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to fully understand this poems meaning please see my other work titled i used to bet the devil my head... thanks for reading comments are highly appreciated
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i like it... and i understand it =D

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lost for words now..and thoughts and images running wild throughout this place..thats not even a place..but a space thats just there..with wide ranges and walls..forever with thoughts and images running free What Kind of place could this be
hehehe some body understands me? neva! :lol:

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"I'm only laughing on the outside my smile is just skin deep if you could see inside I'm really crying you might join me for a weep."
lol XD... you dont want ppl to understand you... you want to lead them on a whole different trail... when they think they understand you =D
and then be like... CABOOM!! =3

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lost for words now..and thoughts and images running wild throughout this place..thats not even a place..but a space thats just there..with wide ranges and walls..forever with thoughts and images running free What Kind of place could this be
damn... you do understand me... where did i put that damn cloroform bottle?*scratches head all confuzzeld*

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"I'm only laughing on the outside my smile is just skin deep if you could see inside I'm really crying you might join me for a weep."
lol XD... im good like that..
:lol:

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lost for words now..and thoughts and images running wild throughout this place..thats not even a place..but a space thats just there..with wide ranges and walls..forever with thoughts and images running free What Kind of place could this be
i love your poetry when its like this, you have gotten so much better at writing poetry after every poem :)

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" I don't mean to sound bitter, cold, or cruel, but I am, so that's how it comes out. " Bill Hicks
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why thank you love, don't forget i did get alot of help and support from you along the way so its mostly thanks to you and the rest of my deviant stalkers :hug: thanks for the support

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"I'm only laughing on the outside my smile is just skin deep if you could see inside I'm really crying you might join me for a weep."
lol you're welcome :hug:

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" I don't mean to sound bitter, cold, or cruel, but I am, so that's how it comes out. " Bill Hicks
:rofl:

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